| Avoid | Use | |
| actress | actor | |
| authoress | author | |
| chairman | chairperson | |
| female astronaut | astronaut | |
| forefathers | ancestors | |
| foreman | supervisor | |
| mailman | mail carrier | |
| male nurse | nurse | |
| man, mankind (meaning any human being) |
person, people, our species, human beings, humanity |
|
| manmade | synthetic | |
| policeman, policewoman | police officer | |
| salesman | sales representative, salesclerk | |
| veterans | veterans and their spouses |
With the use of pronouns, too, avoid stereotyping. One solution is to rewrite the
sentence to avoid using a pronoun:
| Faulty | Before a surgeon can operate, he must know every relevant detail of the patient's history. | |
| Revised | Before operating, a surgeon must know every relevant detail of the patient's history. |
An alternative is to use the phrase he or she to refer to a singular
word:
| Revised | Before a surgeon can operate, he or she must know every relevant detail of a patient's history. |
Sometimes the best strategy is to use plural pronouns and other plural forms, which do
not show gender.
| Revised | Before surgeons can operate, they must know every relevant detail of a patient's history. |
Race Name a person's race only when it is relevant. If you write "Attending
the meeting were three doctors and an Asian computer programmer," you give more
information about your own stereotypes than about the meeting. In addition, use the names
people prefer for their racial or ethnic affiliation. Consider, for example, that black
and African American are preferred terms; Native American is preferred to American
Indian; Asian is preferred to Oriental.
Place Avoid stereotyping people according to where they come from. Some British
people may be stiff and formal, but not all are. Not all Germans eat sausage and drink
beer; not all North Americans carry cameras and wear plaid shorts.
Be careful, too, with the way you refer to countries and continents. The Americas include
both North and South America, so you need to make the distinction. England, Scotland,
Wales, and Northern Ireland make up Great Britain, or the United Kingdom. In addition,
shifts in world politics and boundaries have renamed many countries: Burma, has
become Myanmar; Ceylon has become Sri Lanka; Rhodesia is now Zimbabwe;
Czechoslovakia has been divided into the Czech Republic and Slovakia. Check
a current atlas or almanac.
Age Avoid derogatory or condescending terms associated with age. Little old lady
can be rephrased as woman in her eighties; an immature adolescent is better
described as a teenager.
Politics As we all see in any election campaign, words referring to politics are
full of connotations. Consider, for instance, how the word liberal has been used
with positive and with negative connotations in various election campaigns. Take care with
words like radical, left-wing, right-wing, and moderate: how are your
readers expected to interpret them? Are you identifying with one group and implicitly
criticizing other groups?
Religion An old edition of an encyclopedia referred to devout Catholics and fanatical Muslims. The new edition refers to both Catholics and Muslims as devout, thus eliminating biased language. Examine your use of words that sound derogatory or
exclusionary, such as cult or fundamentalist, and terms such as these
people that emphasize difference, or even the word we when it implies
that all your readers share your beliefs.
Health and abilities Avoid terms like confined to a wheelchair and victim
(of a disease), so as not to focus on difference and disability. Instead, write someone
who uses a wheelchair and person with (a disease). Do not draw unnecessary attention
to a disability or an illness.
Sexual orientation Refer to a person's sexual orientation only if the information is necessary to your content. To say that someone was defended by a homosexual lawyer is gratuitous when describing a case of stock market fraud, but more relevant in a case of discrimination against homosexuals. Since you will not necessarily know your readers'
sexual orientation, do not assume it is the same as your own, and beware of using terms
and making comments that might offend.
The word normal One word to be especially careful about using is normal
when referring to your own health, ability, or sexual orientation. Some readers
could justifiably find that offensive.
See also
Word Choice Checklist
Dictionary and Thesaurus
Exact Words and Connotations
Tone and Language
Figurative Language
Avoiding Tired and Pretentious Language