Active and Passive Voices
Would you rather others described you as active or passive?
Give your ideas the same opportunity!
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Active voice: |
Thomas chased the ball. |
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Passive voice: |
The ball was chased. |
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Active voice: |
Thomas chases the ball daily. |
| Passive voice: | The ball is chased daily. |
Notice that the second sentence in each pair doesn't let readers know who's doing the chasing. The second pair's passive sentence, in fact, sounds a bit odd. In the passive voice, the subject of the sentence isn't the do-er of the action the verb expresses.
| Passive voice: | The cookie jar is broken. |
| You can see why children would want to use the passive voice. |
| Passive voice: | My credit card was stolen. |
| You can see why sometimes adults need to use the passive voice. |
| Passive voice: | It was noted that the Monarch butterflies were dead. |
| In contrast, you can see how sometimes you need to use the active voice instead-after all, who's doing the noticing in that sentence? |
| Active voice: | The wedding guests noticed that the Monarch butterflies were dead. |
Suddenly the sentence is more interesting and gives readers a better picture of the circumstances.