| Faulty | The commuters were staring hopefully down the track. Just wanted to get to work on time. [fragment: missing subject]. |
| Faulty | The essay won a prize because was so well researched. |
| 1. | Include an appropriate subject to form an independent clause. |
| Revised |
The commuters were staring hopefully down the track. They just wanted to get to work
on time. The essay won a prize because it was so well researched. |
| 2. | Turn the fragment into an -ing participle phrase and attach it to the independent clause. |
| Revised | The commuters were staring hopefully down the track, just wanting to get to work on time. |
See also
Phrase
Dependent Clause
Missing Verb
Missing Subject
Compound Predicate
Intentional Use