Revising for Parallelism
Each of the following sentences lacks parallel structure. In the text boxes, rewrite the sentences using parallel structure. After you finish the exercise, click on Email to email your work to your instructor, or click on Print to print a copy of your work.


1. Many players like practicing, playing, and to score points.




2. Swimming, jogging, and exercise in a gym improve a person's health.




3. Our final project must include three interviews, one book review, and have us prepare a class presentation.




4. My boss told me that I needed to report to work at 7:00 a.m., that I needed to wear a company uniform, and to know that I would need to work long shifts.




5. Edgar's car is always clean, polished, and it is well maintained.




6. Our babysitter is responsible, arrives punctually, and is honest.




7. None of the movies contained violence or sex, and were void of profanity.




8. I did not look forward to driving across town, spending the evening with strangers, and then I would have to drive home late at night, but I was expected to attend the event.