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Writing Connections: You, College, and Careers Book I: Sentences and Paragraphs
Lee Brandon, Mt. San Antonio College
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Grammar Exercises Answer Key Exercise 15: Correcting Faulty Parallelism
Name: ___________________________ Date: __________________On the line that follows each sentence, mark each sentence as P for
parallel or NP for nonparallel. Rewrite the nonparallel sentences.
- Both children and adults enjoy fairy tales._____
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- You may be interested to know more about their authors and their
origins._____
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- When asked to name the authors of fairy tales, most people say either
the Grimm brothers, Hans Christian Anderson, or Walt Disney._____
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- But these men didn't write the stories; they merely collected
or retold them._____
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- Many originated hundreds of years ago as oral folk stories told
by women who wanted to pass on their knowledge and experiences._____
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- These women, who had no rights in their male-dominated societies,
had two other purposes: rebelling against their many restrictions
and making their opinions known._____
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- Their stories, which were imaginative, gruesome, and frightening,
were not meant for children._____
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- They included cannibalistic witches, murderous parents, and man-eating
animals._____
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- Their tales were filled with not only scary characters but also
gory violence._____
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- In the original "Cinderella," one of Cinderella's greedy stepsisters
cuts off her toe so her foot would fit in the slipper, and the other
cuts off her heel._____
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- As blood oozes from the sisters' shoes, pigeons peck out their eyes
to punish them for their wickedness and lies._____
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- In Charles Perrault's seventeenth-century version of "Little Red
Riding Hood," the heroine fails not only to outsmart the wolf but
also to escape being devoured._____
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- In the Grimm brothers' version, a woodcutter is Red Riding Hood's
rescuer and slices open the wolf's belly to let her out._____
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- The original Snow White contained neither dwarves
nor a magic mirror._____
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- In that version, it is Snow White's natural mother and father who
drive her cruelly and maliciously out of the house and into the woods._____
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- The Grimm brothers changed the story so that Snow White is abandoned
by a male servant, protected by male dwarves, and rescued by a male
prince._____
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- It is their version that adds the wicked stepmother, the poisoned
apple, and a glass coffin._____
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- The story "Sleeping Beauty" had to be stripped of cannibalism, sex
crimes, and marital unfaithfulness._____
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- Still, though, even the old versions taught people what were punishable
sins and who deserved rewards._____
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- In today's versions, the good still wins. The bad still lose._____
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