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Writing Connections: You, College, and Careers
Book I: Sentences and Paragraphs

Lee Brandon, Mt. San Antonio College
Grammar Exercises Answer Key
Exercise 15: Correcting Faulty Parallelism

Name: ___________________________ Date: __________________

On the line that follows each sentence, mark each sentence as P for parallel or NP for nonparallel. Rewrite the nonparallel sentences.
  1. Both children and adults enjoy fairy tales._____

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  2. You may be interested to know more about their authors and their origins._____

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  3. When asked to name the authors of fairy tales, most people say either the Grimm brothers, Hans Christian Anderson, or Walt Disney._____

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  4. But these men didn't write the stories; they merely collected or retold them._____

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  5. Many originated hundreds of years ago as oral folk stories told by women who wanted to pass on their knowledge and experiences._____

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  6. These women, who had no rights in their male-dominated societies, had two other purposes: rebelling against their many restrictions and making their opinions known._____

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  7. Their stories, which were imaginative, gruesome, and frightening, were not meant for children._____

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  8. They included cannibalistic witches, murderous parents, and man-eating animals._____

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  9. Their tales were filled with not only scary characters but also gory violence._____

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  10. In the original "Cinderella," one of Cinderella's greedy stepsisters cuts off her toe so her foot would fit in the slipper, and the other cuts off her heel._____

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  11. As blood oozes from the sisters' shoes, pigeons peck out their eyes to punish them for their wickedness and lies._____

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  12. In Charles Perrault's seventeenth-century version of "Little Red Riding Hood," the heroine fails not only to outsmart the wolf but also to escape being devoured._____

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  13. In the Grimm brothers' version, a woodcutter is Red Riding Hood's rescuer and slices open the wolf's belly to let her out._____

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  14. The original Snow White contained neither dwarves nor a magic mirror._____

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  15. In that version, it is Snow White's natural mother and father who drive her cruelly and maliciously out of the house and into the woods._____

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  16. The Grimm brothers changed the story so that Snow White is abandoned by a male servant, protected by male dwarves, and rescued by a male prince._____

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  17. It is their version that adds the wicked stepmother, the poisoned apple, and a glass coffin._____

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  18. The story "Sleeping Beauty" had to be stripped of cannibalism, sex crimes, and marital unfaithfulness._____

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  19. Still, though, even the old versions taught people what were punishable sins and who deserved rewards._____

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  20. In today's versions, the good still wins. The bad still lose._____

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